It looks better than it is, because I semi-cheated by rewriting some of the older stuff I came up with way back when I first started this a year ago. Still, it had to be done to bring it in line with my new ideas, and I feel better having done it. And, significantly, I’ve come up with a mental trick to help me not dwell on every sentence: When I’m writing something I know is crap, I use a red font like this. That way I can look at it and say, “This is only temporary. Don’t worry about it. Nothing to see here, move along, move along.” Don’t know why, but it seems to work. Anyway, I’d like to double this amount by next week. If I can do that then I’ll really feel like I’m getting back up to speed.